RHETORICAL NARRATIVE

So...what is a rhetorical narrative?

To put it simply, it's telling a story

One of the fundamental ways to get your speech to stand out in a round is to make sure that your speech not only has the argumentation to match the quality of the round and the presentation, but an additional level of intrigue that comes from the story the speech is trying to convey. Think about it from the judge’s perspective, they are watching over three hours of speeches and questioning. What do you think would stand out more, a speech that’s simply a recitation of fact, or one that includes the evidence needed to prove the argument, while entertaining the judge. Your speech should not only convince the room to vote your way on a piece of legislation but do so in a compelling way. The speech also needs to continue the theme throughout. A disjointed intro or conclusion makes your speech come across much less cohesive and can knock you down in the eyes of the judges. You should establish your rhetoric early in your speech and end with a strong conclusion that brings it all together to make your speech come across polished. 



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Rhetorical Narrative and Clash

This presentation goes further into depth about how you can apply this resource's tips onto your speeches in-round!

Types of Rhetorical Narrative 

Check out this example of 2023 Senate champion Tyler Luu using humor during  NSDA 2023 Senate Finals!



Humorous

One of the most common ways to implement a rhetorical narrative, is to try and make a speech more humorous to break up the monotony of a congress round. This can range from harmless puns strewn throughout the bill such as using a doctor metaphor when discussing drug legislation to jokes about current events/what’s going on in the news. The pun example is much simpler and much more common. If you’re discussing prescription drugs, one might say that the “affirmation has misdiagnosed the problem,” and you’re here to “Prescribe the antidote to make the debate better.” Little puns and jokes like this don’t take up much time, but they do differentiate your speech and make you stand out in a round full of other competitors.  Additionally, starting with a relatable joke can make the speech more entertaining right off the bat, but it's important to not go overboard. Any joke that targets another speaker can backfire, however, so be careful especially in outrounds at tournaments to not come across disrespectful. 


Inspirational: 

Inspiration is another common example, think of it like giving a campaign speech. You’re trying to rally people behind the idea that the legislation you’re trying to enact today will create a genuine difference. Examples of this usually center around trying to bring up a central impact that this legislation will fix. Think of it like an actual speech on the floors of congress where representatives often advocate strongly for their constituencies and the passionate change that this legislation can bring to them. Most speeches fall into this category, but a particularly strong speech with a poignant message will absolutely trump others like it. The key is to center more on the potential change and really expand upon the impacts to show why your position on the legislation improves the status quo the most. It’s very similar to a dramatic speech, but it’s more of a positive note, “we can make a change” vs “here is the damage we’ve done by not making a change.” 


Rep Veer Juneja NSDA 2022 Finals (2:30:15-2:33:23)  uses inspirational rhetoric to his advantage to inspire unity throughout his speech. 

Watch Rep. Genevieve Cox TOC 2020 Final (40:12-44:26 ) use a personal story to further humanize her speech. This works effectively to make her impacts and arguments stand out in the round. 



Dramatic: 

This form of rhetoric is an incredibly impactful one when done effectively. This rhetorical strategy relies more on the emotional appeal often working in stories of those affected by the problem that this legislation seeks to solve. The stories show the more human side of congressional debate and allows the judge to connect with your material through a personal perspective rather than abstract. This approach is very common in congressional debate, and requires passion in delivery to come across well to the judges. These speeches bring a more serious tone that many judges, especially on the national circuit, prefer. 


Historical

This rhetorical style is fantastic for complex legislation that dives into dense topics. With this approach you provide context to the broader legislative that this bill falls into and you explain that it continues previous efforts to solve a problem. For example, starting a speech centered around climate change by mentioning the failures of the Kyoto Protocols and Paris Climate Accords to emphasize that the US needs comprehensive action to adequately address the climate crisis. These involved references to famous historical figures, and often play on the idea that this problem has needed a solution for a long time, emphasizing the importance of addressing the issue now is vital 

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Tyler Luu's use of historical rhetoric during 2023 NSDA Senate Finals (7:22:47-7:25:54) helps to set up his speech's impacts. 


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Mastering Rhetoric & Rhetorical Narrative

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Finding inspiration for rhetoric 

There are numerous different ways to find inspiration for rhetoric! You can start with looking at famous book, TV, or Movie characters that people can relate to.

 Often cartoons work well as both the parent judges in the room and fellow competitors get the reference. Additionally, old comics (like Charlie Brown) can serve as great anecdotes to highlight something about the legislation. Looking at history is another great source for this as a reference to well-known historical figures can help situate the speech in the appropriate context and it provides a well-understood reference for the room to latch on to. The key piece of this approach is to make sure that your reference makes logical sense given the topic and that it doesn’t make your speech choppier or less coherent. You can subtly reference the rhetoric you use throughout the rest of the speech as well, especially when transitioning between points, or when wrapping up your speech to further make the speech seem more polished. When searching for rhetoric, try and make it easily understood and as widely known as possible, you want to spend as little time as you can explaining the rhetoric itself, and more time focusing solely on how the rhetoric connects to your speech. Avoid obscure references, niche songs/artists, or less popular movies and shows as this complicates the point you’re trying to prove.


Rhetorical clash

Throughout the round, as speakers come and refute what others have said, it's a good idea to play off of others’ rhetoric as long, as you stay respectful. This would look like tying your intro into what someone else said, or when refuting someone’s point, counter both their argumentation as well as their rhetoric. If they reference a childhood cartoon, for instance, mention a similar cartoon that disproves the point that your fellow representative was trying to make. This little trick makes your speech seem vastly more nuanced and helps you stand out in the judges’ eyes, helping your rank immensely as you stand out rather than just blending in. I would highly recommend trying to work on rhetorical clash as it is more of an advanced move that helps you immensely. That being said, be careful as rhetorical clash can sometimes come across as irrelevant or even rude in the eyes of judges, potentially penalizing you in the minds of some judges. If you look through any of the previous recordings of TOC, NSDA, or any national circuit tournament you’ll see plenty of instances of rhetorical clash that enhance a speech. This takes some practice, but the best way to get better is to get examples from previous finals rounds, and then try to apply it in rounds so that it becomes far more natural. 


Rhetorical Analysis

This slideshow by Grace Jackson analyzes NSDA 2024 House and Senate  finals speakers use rhetoric throughout the round. 

Need more help on mastering rhetoric? Here are links to final rounds to learn from some of the best of the best!

NSDA 2024 Senate

NSDA 2022 House


All NSDA final rounds can be find on the NSDA website under "resources."